Poem 12 - "I Don't Want to go to the River"

I Don't Want to go to the River
Avigayil Rosensweig

I don't want to go to the the river, mother.
It's too far and I'm tired
and I have homework and
I told my friends we'd hang out
also there are cisterns in case of siege
and I hear in Jerusalem Hezekiah built a tunnel
it takes water straight into the city
and I don't want to.

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  1. Judy LesermanApril 16, 2018 at 5:35 PM

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  2. Professor MillerApril 26, 2018 at 5:26 PM

    That first line sounds so resonant, almost mythic, you know "the river" and all it connotes. I suspect there is a specific reference in this brief poem that I am not getting, though. I like the playfully resistant tone. This poem is one of several you have turned in that feel quite natural and spontaneous.

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